Mobile App Project Proposal Presentation « Design for Mobile Interaction

#1 written by Christina Hardison
about 3 years ago

This presentation was really well made. Nice concept map. This made me understand more fully about what your app is trying to do.

Maybe it would have been more successful in slides because it felt like you were having trouble following your map in presentation mode.

#2 written by Elizabeth Peters
about 3 years ago

interesting presentation method, although it is hard for me to read .. but i see the big picture.
I understand your breakdown, even though I do not know how to play music, but it is interesting how you took something that is taught from a professor and made it visual.

#3 written by Betsy Sherertz
about 3 years ago

> maps are really developed and looks like you got a lot out of them. they may be a little hard to follow when it comes to presenting it

> at the same time, the hands on presentation is different and interesting that you fully engage with your work as you explain it, even though it may be harder to navigate

> i think the feedback you got from your interview is really good material, and gave you a good starting off point for how to teach someone to play the cello.

> seems like you have a good grasp on how a fairly understandable interface should work for something so complicated

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#4 written by Caitlin Atteberry
about 3 years ago

Really interesting style of presentation. I wish it was a little more visual for us visual learners to get a greater understanding of your app.

Does the parent always have to be there to help the kid, or can the kid use the app on his/her own?

Your variable section cleared up a lot of questions for me. It will be interesting to see if this actually improves the process of learning an instrument (you convinced me).

#5 written by Nick Romanos
about 3 years ago

Your research is very thorough.

This is hard for me to understand as a non-musician, but given your efforts, I can’t help but feel as if this would be useful.

Your wire-framing in space looks professional and add a nice touch of photography to this otherwise vector-heavy presentation. Well done!

#6 written by Dave Maki
about 3 years ago

-very well organized, good direction and research to support it
-how does it correct something the user is doing wrong?
-what are the ways the app helps the user to correct the incorrect notes?

#7 written by amcneil
about 3 years ago

-Great that you broke it down, what motivates/demotivates/contexts/etc and recognized the amount of variables involved. Its not an easy thing to do. Everything seemed to be a factor when I was learning my instrument.
-Well organized presentation, and cleanly simple

#8 written by Lauren Hall
about 3 years ago

I like the different way you presented, but I didn’t have a chance to really read and understand what you were talking about. (too much information fed to the audience at one time) I think the presentation would have been more effective with a few slides that scrolled across like your overall presentation, but good job for trying something different.

You might want to think about the multi-tasking ability of the students while they are trying to play, remembering notes/posture/where to put their fingers/etc. How could this application aid and not distract while they are playing? I feel that if the student placed the iphone on the stand while playing they might become frustrated with it.

#9 written by Leah Lawrence
about 3 years ago

I like your presentation and storyboard. I like how you tied all that information together.

#10 written by LoganTV
about 3 years ago

good succession of information.

seems like youve been researching and thinking alot.
i’d like to see what youve been doing as far as an interface.

#11 written by Riley Huston
about 3 years ago

Because you are working with a complex subject, I would recommend a simple approach for presentation, something more personal perhaps. The idea is strong considering the challenge of interpreting the learning process of music.

#12 written by Madiha Malik
about 3 years ago

I really like how you took us through your process map to show your chronology of thinking and researching.
Everything is well though-out and researched.
Is there a way to integrate other instruments into this formula and not just the cello?

#13 written by Jen
about 3 years ago

Strengths:
-Tying all of the research into one larger-scale map is a cool approach. Seems it could function as a poster as well as a presentation, which is pretty nifty.
-Very solidly researched, covers so many aspects of learning music.
-I wish I’d had one of these when I was first learning to play piano/trumpet!

Weaknesses:
-How does the app adapt to the needs of each specific type of instrument? Might it start teaching a trumpet player to try playing different notes “open”, and a cello player different bowing techniques? Would it even work for a non-strings player?
-How does the app change to reflect the skill the user is building?

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